I was given the task write down my observations of Mariah for a
day. Thinking that it would be easy, I was soon proven wrong! She lives such a
crazy life, but very blessed, and I will do my best to show you her life,
through my observations of one day.
At 6:55 in the morning on Friday, October 18,
2013, Mariah got nicely woken up by her mother who made a delicious
breakfast and had all ready for her on the kitchen table with. It is how she likes
it. She told me that everyday her mother either makes her a
breakfast sandwich or bagel, and you cannot forget her tiny plastic cup filled
with her orange juice and has the gallon carton next to her. After
she ate breakfast she went back upstairs to get ready. In the process of
getting ready, her younger sister, Makenzie, came in looking up at her older
sister asking her "Is my outfit okay Mariah?" Tired and cranky,
Mariah responds, "uhhh sure… I mean you are out of the ridiculous dress
code for school, but it’s a spirit day so it’s up to you. I mean I would not
wear that but I am not the one getting in trouble.” Makenzie with a smirk says
okay and finishes getting ready. Today, Mariah was ready before her sister was
and she sat down stairs yelling at her to hurry up. I have soon realized that
she is not very nice in the mornings. Once she finally helps Makenzie look
spiffy for school, or makes sure she is in the absurd dress code that their
school gives them, they head out to the already warmed car that their mother
started for them.
On Mariah’s way to school, Nik Klousmier called
her and asked for a ride to school, so she went and picked him up off the side
of the road. When she finally got to school she runs to class, hiding from the terrifying
principle. When in class Mariah puts her head on her desk trying to ignore
everyone as she tries to wake up and hopes that this is all just a long dream.
Around second period she has to forcibly wake herself up to understand the
concepts in AP English. After second period is break and she has to wiggle her way
through the jammed packed, crazy middle school hallway. Trying to put a
smile on her face so she doesn’t explode, she finally makes it to her
classroom. Once setting down her ever so heavy school bag, she heads back out
into the jungle. Since it is a Friday, her patience is running low, and she puts
a smile on her face to keep herself from saying something she doesn’t mean. With
concentrated eyes looking towards the end of the hall, she finally makes it
through alive. When she’s through the mess, it becomes an easy dash to her
locker to grab her UTT books and run back to study. While cramming all of break
to study for the test the horrific sound of the class bell rings and her large brown eyes
got wide. She prays that she remembers everything on the test and slowly puts
her books under her seat. She speedily finishes the test and goes to her
locker. From her classmate’s foolhardy remarks to her, I can tell she does not
like to be in class much. (There will be more back up to this later on in my
journal, during her online class).
After sixth period Mariah went home and relaxed and watched some TV before having to return to school for the pep assembly. On her return to school she was very cheery and happy! During the pep assembly she was full of laughter and had a genuine joy in her face! However, she kept looking back at Austin, with a look of worry. There was something bugging her. I have noticed that she likes her friends to be happy and if they aren’t she worries about them and tries to make them happy. She did not let that look of worry be seen by anyone else, she kept a smile on her face but her eyes were full of concern that no one noticed. She slowly passed through everyone in the halls and made it out to her car. Once her sister got to the car, Mariah ran some errands for her mom and Makenzie, sensing something was wrong kindly asked Mariah what was wrong. Trying not to burden her sister, Mariah responded with saying “Oh nothing is wrong. I am just exhausted from this week. It has been long and stressful and I am just ready to go home and sleep”. Makenzie just brushed it off and they finished running their errands. When Mariah finally got home, she went to her room and curled up on her bed, plugged her phone in and text her friends, then she fell asleep. Her phone suddenly rings, and Austin was on the other line. Trying not to ease drop, I did not listen to her conversation, but whatever was said, resolved her issues and she looked much happier afterwards.
Mariah then went downstairs and worked on her
blog for Mrs. Myers class due at midnight tonight. Taking a break from her blog
since it was going nowhere, Mariah went to the movies with Makenzie and her
crazy family friend, Tyler… They saw Gravity, which they said was an amazing
movie! When she got home from the movie Mariah went straight to the computer to
finish up her blog.
This is the end of my day to observe Mariah,
but I noticed many things about her, which Tyler gave me an insight on and I can
see all of them in her. She can be mean and cranky, yet very caring. This might
be from her bit of introverted side in the mornings and not wanting to see
people, but slowly throughout the day she warms up to people and her extrovertious
(yes I know not a real word, but I like it) side shows. She goes through her
day battling her want to be in silence but to care for people and put a smile
on their faces. Not many people know that about Mariah, but she loves to be in
silence and have her “me” time to herself (that it was she calls the time she
spends by herself) which she likes to get daily.
If you are wondering who or what I am… I am her large brown eyes. (Or as she would say her poop brown eyes haha)
You'll definitely need to put this in your "compliation of self" at the end of the year-- a great description of a typical day durnig your Senior year!
ReplyDeleteSome issues with sentence fluency with this particular blog-- something that will help you improve that skill in general is reading your writing out loud after writing it, and smoothing out any rough areas as you catch mistakes. Doing that with your journals would be especially helpful! Would have loved more indirect characterization with this also, but it was still fun to see "a day in the life of Mariah." :)
One last thought (in the spirit of this week's charge that the ladies embrace who they are)-- calling yourself a "fatty" for indulging in a treat doesn't help you and also doesn't help anyone hearing you. There's nothing right or wrong about consuming food, and shaming yourself for doing so will only drag your self- esteem down, and reinforce the negative idea to girls within earshot that consuming certain types of food is somehow morally wrong. That simply isn't true. You are lovely, and it is perfectly fine to have a treat on occasion!
Finally, if you ever want to hear my take on dress-code, we should talk. :)
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